Wednesday, April 18, 2007

Altered Reality

This post began as an exercise for my Seattle writing group: each of us chose three of our favorite words, then we were to write a poem (or group of poems) using all 18 words.
The poem below (all 18 words included!) was inspired by an article I read last week in the Seattle Times.
Apparently, in the name of better image quality, Google Earth has replaced all of its post-Katrina Gulf Coast maps with pre-Katrina satellite images.

What's wrong with this picture? If a map isn't accurate and real, what's the point?



ODE TO GOOGLE EARTH
for karen l

Consider this:
A mango bobs

on water,
a balloon swept up
in tempest
skyward;
panicked vertigo.
Wind and tide punch
shore and tree

and home
and sea
Until
a placard on a pole,
a door
---twisted,
tangled---
jangle
in a street deserted.

Politicians
so adroit!
Wring their hands and
ruminate,
scowl and scamper,
duck their heads and
cover up;
kings caught in
skivvies.
Later
with ebullience
they vow changes not delivered.

Now
---eighteen months gone by--
In clandestine rooms with
big oak tables
where not one is breathing the aroma
of fish
of rot
of death locked
in homes collapsed,
they futz and alter.

Maps remade
---although they lie
Destruction vanished
---though it hasn't
Neighborhoods
---though dead---
rebuilt
Boats
in harbors nonexistent.

Photo: approaching storm; hanalei bay, Kauai

4 comments:

marti said...

Lovely. I like how the words all pulled together.

midgeling said...

Indeed. What is the point, then, if you don't have something real and accurate? Marti is right. You are a great read. :-)

chimayo bound said...

First of all, I loved the poem! So eloquent, in the face of such media lunacy (and, to be realistic, not just the media but just about everyone in any position of power to do good and help us). Thanks for sharing it with me, and for the dedication! I think that's a first for me :-)

Your blog is terrific--lovely photos (of course), and articulate prose. Thanks for sharing it with me.
Have a writing group meeting tonight, and I'm not finished the stories so I'll close for now,....take care, and thanks again for your sensitivity.

chimayo bound said...

(above comment transcribed from karen l., to whom the poem is dedicated!)